So this is another poem to expand upon my love poems vol. 1 that I posted back in August. Hope you enjoy!
Understand
Understand
That the words
I write on this page
Come from a sane mind
Because I don’t think
That just because I may
Dream
Day dream
Or otherwise
Think of you constantly
Should be grounds
For insanity
Understand
That as I lie
In bed
Waiting for sleep
To come
I think of you
And wonder
Why you’re not
Lying here next
To me
Because it’s just
So cold being
All alone
Understand
That I think
Your one of the
Most beautiful
Girls I’ve ever seen
And I would
Tell you that everyday
Through my best verses
And trademark them
With a passionate kiss
Understand
That just being
Near you makes me
Happy
Everything from
Your smile
To the sound
Of your voice
Makes me
Feel alive
Understand
That I really
Don’t know
What to do with
Myself when your
Not there
And
I guess what
I’m trying to say
Is that I want you
To understand
That I care
So much
About you
That I just wish
That you were here
With me
And to understand
How I feel about you
Just want you
To Understand
Friday, April 2, 2010
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this is simple, i mean that in a good way. the feeling of unrequited love comes across strongly, and i think most people can relate to the thoughts you express in this poem.
ReplyDeleteI think Shayna's got the right idea pretty perfectly here. You're not trying to do anything complicated, but it doesn't come across as a lack of any structure, it's just embracing simplicity.
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